2008年10月30日 星期四

What is My Finally Goal In My Life??

Different people have different dream or goal in their lives. Some of them think get a lot of money is the most important thing, some of them think to have a wonderful family are their finally goal in their lives. To me, I don't need too rich or too success in my job. However, I really hope I can have my own prefect family. In fact, my ideal life is having my own family, including husband and my children.
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Having a lot of money are many people goal in their lives. Therefore, people need busy working all the day even though they don't eat or haven't time to stay with family. However, when they think they earn much money, their health are turning bad at that time, so they cannot eat many good food or go traveling. Also, some of their family members getting old or have already died. Then, people suddenly discovered no matter how much money that they can earn , they cannot buy their health or the time to be with their family. Hence, I don't need earn too much money,because having a warm family life is the most important thing to me. Of course, we still need work for our daily life, but we still need find some time to stay with our family. The time to stay with family is limited, we cannot miss the time to be with our parents, husband and our children.In fact, I am sure I will enjoy every second to stay with my family.
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Moreover, I think people cannot lack of marry during their lives. Marry seems a necessity process in our life. I saw many people that they chose not getting marry in their lives. They think get marry is not the important thing in their lives. They would rather get busy on their work or do something else, but not under the family control. In addition, they aldo think they won't feel bored if they have a lot of friends. However, as time goes by, when they are getting old, they finally found that actually they need someone who can stay with and take care of them. It is because their friends also have their own families, and their friends cannot stay with them all the time. On the other hand, our spouse can do it. They can be with us whenever we need, they can accoompany us to face both happiness and sadness. As a result, having a spouse is so important to me more than the other things.
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In our lives, we have many different processes, such as student time, working time ,get marry, and die. My finally Goal in my life is having my own family. I hope I have a good husband and cute children. Even though it is not a easy to achieve, but i will try my best to suceess my finally goal!!!!

2008年10月23日 星期四

To Look Back My Writing Skills

Having a good writing skill is important to learn well English. Writing is including paragraphs structure, sentences structure, grammars structure, and right vocbabulary. To me, writing is my wrost part of English. It is because my gammar is not good, vocabulary is not enough, and the main problems to my writing is that ,I don't know how to writing a good essay. In fact, I have to go to America to study English. Most of all, I need to improve my writing skill in ALP classes. As time goes by, I have already studied in ALP for 9 months. Luckily, my writing teachers in ALP are so good. They know how to teach writing and help me to improve my writing skills.
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Writing is difficult to learn well. Many people say even though native speakers also cannot write a good essay. Writing a good essay need have a good organization, right grammar structure. Also, we cannot miss some transition words, examples and reasons to make the essay looks more coherence and logical. To me, before I took the ALP writing, my writing skill was so poor, I don't know what is thesis statement, and I have no idea about the supporting sentence and how to make the paragraphs be coherence. But now, I can learn many different writing skills from my writing teachers. The reason that I can improve my writing skill in these few months is because I have many writing practice chances . Nowadays, I know how to write an organization essay finally.
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Moreover, I learned how to aviod the fragment that appeared in my essay. I always miss the verb form inside the sentence because of my grammar problems, so it won't be a complete sentence and teachers named that "fragment". Therefore, I have to double check my sentences after i finished the essay. I need to see whether I write the correct verb form in the sentences, so that I can avoid the fragment sentence can be found in my essay. This is what I feel happy to see my essay becomes better.
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"Practice makes perfect", there is no ending to me to learn more writing skills. Hence, I have to keep going to improve my writing , like grammar and vocabulary. Using correct grammar and vocabulary are the way to write a good essay. Because I haven't got enough English vocabularies, so that I cannot use the correct word to express my thinking. Furthermore, I have to improve my "Chinese English", I always think my native language, Cantonese before I write an English essay. Therefore, my sentences will become "Chinese Englsih " . This is the main problem to me that I could not write an "A" essay. I hope someday I can totally avoid to use any "Chinese English" sentences in my English essay.
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Writing is interesting but challenged. I cannot forget to remind myself the writing skill before I write an essay or letter. Taking ALP class is a good way to help me to improve my English writing. However, teachers just only can help me to learn the writing skills, I still have to improve it by myself. Having a good writing skill is not only useful for exam, but also useful for my future job. As a result, I need to thank you all of my writing teachers in ALP that they help me to improve my writing. I will never give up to achieve my goal----to write an "A" essay!!!!

2008年10月15日 星期三

My Favorite Movie----Grease





Seeing movie is a really good activity when I feel bored or nothing to do. I like see romance movie or funny movie. Actually, I have a lot favorite movies. But, my most favorite one is "Grease" which showed on 1978. It is a comedy and musical movie. The main actor is John Travolta and Olivia Newton-John.
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The movie is talking about a good girl Sandy and greaser Danny fell in love during the summer time. When they meet again, they're study in the same high school. However, because of their personality are different, it seems so difficult to them to get together. During the school time, there are many misunderst and problems between them. Luckily, because they are so love each other, they finally can go together and have a happy ending.
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This movie used a funny plot and including many beautiful songs. The movie background is high school and to tell a love story in the school. The movie used many good songs in the movie, and those songs are so meaningful, they are related to the story. It helps audiences easy to understand the body of the flim and won't feel bored. Also, the prefect actor is the main reson that make the movie sucessful.
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Even though it is a simple school love story, but it also has its own main idea behind the film. The film tell us that love is no standard different. If we love each other , no matter the personality or life background are totally different, we still can love together. Love is much powerful than anything. Therefore, the movie is going to tell the audience" To love bravely".
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"Grease" is a wonderful and successful movie in America. It was famous in the world. It got nominated for Oscar and another 3 wins & 7 nominations . This movie is sutible for any ages people to see. Also, this movie is easy to understand , so that it is a good way to learn English through seeing this movie. As a result, I strongly recommend all of my friends to see this movie.
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P.S. My most favorite song in the movie...hope u guys like it^^

2008年10月2日 星期四

I Hate Getting Any Sick!!!!!!!

Nobody like getting any sick even though noone can prevent it. Sick make people tired, uncomfortable, wasting time and make the other people worry. This week , I got sick from Tuesday until now, this is the first time I sick so serious and spend too long time to sick in USA. In fact, I have so strongly emotion about sick at this time. I hate getting sick because it make me feel so uncomfortable, unconvinent to do anything and affect the other people.
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First, I hate feel sick because it makes my health feel so uncomfortable. I don't know how to express now my emotion and feeling, i just only can say...if someone who got sick, he/she will know my feeling now. I got a high fever this week that I feel whole body is painful. I don't want to eat anything, also I cannnot sleep well because the body doesn't feel good. At that time, I really hope it's not my body. Also, sometimes I feel so scared I will be die on that time of sickness and never see my family again. Therefore, I hate to get any kinds of sick.
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Another reason that I really hate to get sick because it makes me feel so unconvinent to do anything. When I got any sick, I cannot go anywhere and do any works. Like this time, even though I still attend the classes, but I cannot fully pay attention during the classes and finish my homework hardly. It is because I need spend too much time to take a rest, so the sick completly destroy my time schedule. This is one of the reasons that I hate getting sick.
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Finally, I hate to get sick because it is not only affect me, but also affect the other people who they need take care of me. When I felt sick in Hong Kong, my parents just stayed with me and take care of me, I can felt that they were felt more worry about my health than myself. In USA, this time I feel sick, my parents cannot take care of me, but lucikily I still have someone who can stay with me before the night and take care of me. In my heart, actually I feel so sorry that I need waste his time to take care of me and make him worry about me,,,,but I also can feel that whose is the most important in my heart through the sick time....Anyway...of course I don't want get any sick if i can choose.
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Getting sick cannot avoid in our life because this is a normal matter. We only can do is to know the ways to decline the numbers of sick ,like eat more healthy food that prevent any sick or check our body frequently. As a result, anyone can have a healthy body and say good-bye to doctors.